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4.ควรมีตัวอย่างเยอะๆ จะได้มีมีตัวอย่างแนวทางในการเขียนมากยิ่งขึ้นสำหรับคนที่ยังไม่ค่อยเข้าใจในการเขียน

        In the future, I would to like the flying car. The name of the car is "FUZA" this is sci-fi VTOL flying car (Mahieddine,2016). It has four turbine and three seat. It use electrical energy.It has maximum speed of 400 mph. It price is 20 million bath. I am sure that the FUZA will be used in the next 52 year.

Reference

Mahieddine,J.(2016).Futurism, future cars, future aviation, flying cars, watercrafts, future concepts. Retrieved from http://psipunk.com/the-honda-fuzo-concept-flying-car/#more-496.

              The name of the car is "Fuza" this is sci-fi VTOL flying car (John Mahieddine,2016). It has four turbine and three-seat. It use electrical energy. I has maximum speed of 640 km/hr. It price is 20 million bath.I am sure that the Fuza  will be used in the next 52 year.

Reference

John Mahieddine,2016 Future Transportation

Futurism, future cars, future aviation, flying cars, watercrafts, future concepts http://psipunk.com/the-honda-fuzo-concept-flying-car/#more-496

- What is this car name? Fuzo.

- What does it look like? It looked like a plane.
- What kind of fuel does it use? it use electrical energy.
- How many kilometers per hour? 640km/hr.
- How much does it cost? 20 million baht.

- What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing? John Mahieddine,2016.

- What source in the reference list that the writer used?

Jonh Mahieddine,2016 Future Transportation Futurism, future cars, future aviation, flying cars, watercrafts, future concepts http://psipunk.com/the-honda-fuzo-concept-flying-car/#more-496

      Ronaldo is the greatest football player of all-time. Ronaldo is my favorite athlete. He is tall and gain weight. He has a round face and short black hair. He is not only good looking but he is also very good at football. In his career, Ronaldo 2 champions in world cup. I like him because I love to play football. I want to be a great football player like him. I think Ronaldo was the best football player the world has ever seen.

- What is his name?/Ronaldo

- What kind of sports does he play?/Football

- What does he look like?/He is best player of all-time

- What has been his sport success?/2 champions in world cup

- Why does the writer like him/her?/I love to play football.

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 Ronaldo is the greatest football player of all-time. Ronaldo is my favorite athlete. He is tall and gain weight. He has a round face and short black hair. He is not only good looking but he is also very good at football. In his career, Ronaldo 2 champions in world cup. I like him because I love to play football. I want to be a great football player like him. I think Ronaldo was the best football player the world has ever seen.